the air hangs about like ribbons
ensnared in paper sharp tangles
that course lines marked through
silence
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the air hangs about like ribbons
ensnared in paper sharp tangles
that course lines marked through
silence
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Love the ambivalence of this. Starts of very pastoral, then introduces conflice with ensnared and tangled anc course. Love the single word of silence at the end. Well done!