Too Quiet

the air hangs about like ribbons

ensnared in paper sharp tangles

that course lines marked through

silence

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One thought on “Too Quiet

  1. Love the ambivalence of this. Starts of very pastoral, then introduces conflice with ensnared and tangled anc course. Love the single word of silence at the end. Well done!

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